it's quite heart-rending. you almost make me cry! I hope you feel better now...and the ending was just so beautiful and true. anyway, fortunately, there's writing to evacuate all our pain and our suffering...usually writing helps me to fill the vacuum in my life...-sigh- I'm in a depressive mood now...

Hehe I wrote a piece just like this one some days ago, because I felt like I had to vent myself. It's very good! Most of all I like your language.

“Hearts are made of glass; they are bound to break.”

What a beautiful line! I really like that, it sounds like a line of poetry.

This is very sad. If this actually happened to you, I hope you're okay!

Very pretty piece, Mr!

Ooh...I'm so sorry... :( I was just wondering where you were 'cause you hadn't updated lately...well, looks like I found out... Sorry, again... Meh, if there's anything I can do to cheer you up or anything, let me know...there's not much I can do but yeah...

I like the story, though... The last line's so strong...and you get the emotions across really well through the rest of it...

Love you xoxo Lain