on word comes to min, "ouc" but that doesn't sum up the poem. I liked the fact that it was short but i knida didn't get the full effect of it, all in all i enjoyed reading it!

um you read one poem i said i was haveing trouble now at written poems maybe look back a little and read another of my poems

did you really need to send me and flamer i'm 18 and i can do in bar i live in england so i'm old enough to drink and i'm classed as an adult but what has my age got to do with anything?

you really need to think about what you say in your "review" was really going to help me?

Beautiful, angsty, well written, poignant, vivid, though provoking...can't you tell I'm trying to come up with a way to express myself here?

This will be short. All I'm going to say is, leave room on the canvas for me to add my own artwork.

i love this. very very powerful. gorgeous work.

now this is definitely what i feel like, the way you describe it, is like you went inside my head and just wrote what you saw, well done, this is fab, going on favs!

Even in this short poem your words are powerful, thats something only good writers can achieve... :)