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Zeva 2006-02-12 . chapter 3
Oh no! Nonononono! He killed himself too?! *sobsob* That's so sad...And yet again, you conveyed his feelings very well. At least they get to see each other now, yeah? *sniffle*
Zeva 2006-02-12 . chapter 2
Ooh...The evil glares from the parents...Ouch. The emotion is nice; it helps bring to mind exactly how Jeffrey must be feeling. Again, nice chapter. ^_^
Zeva 2006-02-12 . chapter 1
I like where this is going. How it started I mean. The suicide obviously isn't a good thing. You conveyed how suddenly it happened very well - one of my friends killed himself, and it happened so suddenly it was like time froze. And poor Jeffrey, blaming himself!! I felt like that too. =[ Very nice start.
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