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| witchwriter 2006-04-25 ch 1, | i like it .I love that little season between the end of winter and the begining of spring |
| Louellena 2006-02-08 ch 1, | is lovely... at first, the summary through me off, but it makes the poem all the more great. ~Lou~ |
| sleeping Pisces 2006-02-07 ch 1, | What sueb262 said. Good and different. Peace, Daze |
| SiriusFan13 2006-02-07 ch 1, | OOH... nice haiku! i like this:) lovely imagery... never thought of flowers clawing their way out, but it's actually a great image... gives them a strenght and power:) *hugs*sirius |
| sueb262 2006-02-07 ch 1, | Wow, this is sure a different take on the renewal of spring, and I really like it! No tender shoots delicately yawning and stretching their way through the soft wet ground, but a spring with its teeth bared, foreshadowing "nature, red of tooth and claw"! |