I really love this series. It's really interesting, and the characters are really 3-D. She also doesn't just try to be tough for EVERYTHING. Just most of the things. That makes it good. Most heroines are just like: oh, I need to save everyone, but I know I can't, and I'm going to sacrifice myself. She doesn't seem as much like that.

Wow great story. i loved it =)
you know how earlier on, you wrote that the curse dies with the caster... but since yuki is still alive, doesn't that mean that the curse is still in effect?
And isn't Yuki a Japanese GIRL's name? Hehe just like to point it out

Hello,

It's me again, even though you probably have no idea who I am. I liked this one as well, though I have to say, I know you can't change it now, but you always skip over the best parts, you create this steamy atmosphere, and then just skip right over it, it is kind of frustrating, but I guess not everyone is comfortable writing about these kind of things. *Sigh*

I love the story anyways, I didn't know what to expect next, it all changed at every turn. Keep up the good work.

Heyy,

I love this story. I love how you make Jamnis (although I don't really like his name. Where'd you get it?) act around her. He's so...sexy? Haha. Anyways, a well developped story so far! I seriously suggest you get this published. If you don't want to find an agent, edit it to perfection, then go to and self-publish it. Make sure you read the terms though coz there's things that I didn't expect, and when you're selling your book, you wanna know how the site works and gives you royalties and everything.

Thanks so much!

Ps. If you have got it published already, I'd love to buy it. :P

Blessed Be.

Dawn.Nyte

she seriously needs to grow up and soon. being immature and delusional and overreacting isn't good if she's being stalked and hunted. i wish she would just talk about what happened-EVERYTHING. and stop being a whiny selfish brat.

couldn't she have left? seriously after all that she stayed... really? damn this girl is dependent.

Okay, at this point I feel like I'm stalking you via review raving...but I can't tell you enough how much I enjoy this trilogy and how phenomenal your writing style, plot, details, characterization, etc... are. You rule my world. You absolutely MUST continue writing!!

Now Jamnis is looking like good boyfriend material~ Glad that he's over the control freak issue ...

Love the ending lines by the way ^^ very interesting, the whimper instead of a bang.

I really enjoyed the story~ I like all the side characters XD Like Siral and Kat, Avery and Vlad and Michael ... I kind of like Dana and Jamnis but not as much, I guess it's because I see more of their flaws since they are the main characters. Michael is cute sometimes but I am indifferent O.o He just doesn't really leave an impression on me.

I very much enjoyed reading this story, and will be moving on to the sequal~

I don't like Jamnis ... he's a control freak.

Seriously though, Jamnis is all wrong for Dana. He's EXACTLY like her mother ... and I'm just thinking, why the hell did she run away from her mother only to end up with someone just like her? Why is she giving in so easily all the time??

In my honest opinion, unless Jamnis changes through the course of this story, I don't like Dana to end up together with Jamnis in the end. Someone else should seriously come and dazzle her away ... and Jamnis needs a taste of things out of his control.

Since a lot of this story has been already written, I'll just see what happens next then. Just voicing what I think of the couple so far.

Really really enjoy the story. I like Vlad, Avery, and even Gavin XD I would have loved Jamnis if only he wasn't such an insensitive bastard. Seriously ... it feels as if he doesn't care about Dana's feelings at all. Not when she wants some space, not when she doesn't want to lose her virginity right away, not when she hates that he had to be all cuddly with another girl... basically he is treating her like a pretty doll that has the added bonus of delicious blood and "entertainment". If he could turn her into a mindless doll, he probably would. That's exactly what he's trying to do, taking away every last shred of her independence and dignity and molding her into his little sex slave and tasty snack.

If I was Dana, I'd get the hell away and find another who actually appreciates a woman with independence and a brain to think for herself.

Excellent! Can't wait to read your next one! =D

i just realized that the last time i reviewed i wrote "4" instead of "4" :/ oops. ANYWAY, i like the third one so far, i just haven't had time to finish yet. laterz!

i think i actually like the whimper ending - which is odd for my usual tastes; but i guess it helps me that I'm reading these so late and that there's already another story waiting for me. I would have commented at the end Bad Blood too, but at the time, there were 4 comments and i didn't want to disturb the number. =) But yes nice work, one little thing about Caroline though, i could have sworn that around the first time she was mentioned i thought she was Sirel's COUSIN instead of sister, but i could totally be hallucinating so... eh. But yay, congrats on magnificent work so far. :) I'll probably comment again in a week or so.

I've been craving for some good, complete stories to read. Something interesting, something different. And then I found your story 'Bad Blood,' and it was exactly what I was looking for. It was different, interesting, and kept me reading until 5 in the morning! So after that, I, of course, had to check out your other stories. Which is how I stumbled upon this one.

In the beginning of this story, I didn't like or trust Kat at all. And I was a little mad at Jamnis when he, in essence, chose Kat over Dana. But then he explained a little bit of why he did that...Still though, I was just waiting for Kat to do something, to try to take Jam away. Or for something to happen between Jamnis and Kat to make Dana extremely pissed off. It doesn't seem like Dana can stay mad at Jam for too long...Anyway, I feel like they do belong together and I hope they stay together. I was hoping they'd try to have a baby, like Ariadne and Gavin did...maybe after Dana was finished earning her degree. But...Dana said something like she wasn't planning on getting pregnant...so that crushed my hopes. lol. Um, and I was also hoping we'd learn a little more about Kat's background...because it seemed a little vague. But I guess it just worked out that way...

It was really well written and had a great storyline! I enjoyed reading it.

You are an amazing storyteller. I'm going to take a little break before moving onto your next installment in this series, as I like to read stories when there further along/closer to completion or complete. I can't wait to read more of your future works!

i really dont know what to say besides this story was exellent. i really love all of the characters and the plot has nice twists that i didnt expect. my only problem-type-thing is that sometimes i feel like i dont know Dana. I know that most girls are complicated but Dana is on a level that I dont always understand. Anyway, thats all for now and i'm going to go start reading blood ties now!

I cannot tell you how much I adore this story.
I was hoping that something would happen between Jamnis and Kat and Dana would get so fed up that her and Jamnis would break up. Then, she would sorta kinda get together with Vlad to totally piss Jamnis off. But of course they would get back together in the end.



You know if you do make a third story, you should have Dana get really pissed off and do something really powerful. Then everyone will be like "Damn."

:)
GREAT STORY!