you always write the most interesting poems, and i never tire of reading them. You might want to read over it though, bcause it looks like you might have meant to start a new paragraph and it didn't work. Anyway. This one...something about it reminded me of a story or a song or something that I knew, but that I know i've never heard before. It's just...it's familiar, and it's inspiring me to write something, but i'm not sure what it is. I'll probably be refering back to it to see if I can get whatever image is trying to form...know what i mean? Hope you post more soon. I haveta go--cya!