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metaphorixx
2007-03-23
ch 1,
abuseI am SO excited for the next chapter of this, you don't even know. I'm going to be like obsessively checking my email until it's posted, and then when I'm done reading it I'm going to have to go re-read the entire Book One and Book Two so that I can keep myself busy until the NEXT next chapter is posted.

Freak much? Yeah, that's me. Anywhoo... Yeah, this is sublime.
dolly-dear
2006-12-27
ch 2,
abuseThis is off to a great start, and I really want to read more! Please?
Emily
2006-11-27
ch 2, anon.
abuseIve fallen in love with your writing. Its got good structure and is gritty and its down-to-earth-nothings's-perfect-so-im-not-going-to-even-bother-attempting-to-lie-and-tell-you-it-is
attitude is really refreshing after being nearly drowned in a sea of fluff, searching for a good slash bording school story. I havent got a chance to comment on the other three or so stories in the series but this is pretty much what i would have said. ay forst i was really disapointed that threre were no true happy endings and there was no way so many people in one school could be ** up. then i starting thinking of my own life and the poepl i know and the issues they face and i realized that this wasnt so far-fetched. Its raw and real, just like life's ment to be. so thanks...for the wake up call.
Emily
merrymowmow
2006-10-03
ch 2,
abuseI was wondering when you're going to update 'Beyond the Gossamer Veil'
BabyKeepItSurreal
2006-08-03
ch 2,
abuseI love Don, he's one of my favorite characters. I'm glad that he's doing better.

You should definately continue this story...
Satoru
2006-07-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseyay a new chapter! I'm so exicted for this story, ever since To Look Without Seeing started I've beed aching to know what happened XD

hehe, will Kevin be in the next chapter? The encounter looks promising ^_^v

-Satoru
willow
2006-07-28
ch 2, anon.
abuselove it
shadow
2006-07-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseW00t, update :D

Write more on this story soon, in DYING to know what happened over Nialls vacation with Don.

-Shadow
jessdarkwater
2006-06-29
ch 2,
abuseUm, hi Erica, remember me? Your wife? Lover of all things Donovan?

You just committed a grievous crime.

Tell me what is wrong with this:

Niall + Donovan + bed = talking.

I'm sure you can now see the error of your ways. You must see that that sum is incorrect and you should in fact have gotten this:

Niall + Donovan + bed = hot boy!sex

See? You should.

Other than that, this chapter was lovely and *yay* a double update with this and Eldermoor. Now I just need my Luke and I'll be happy. Plus you need to camwhore a little on your journal please =D

Now I've just gotta figure what to get you for your birthday grr >=p
Shadow
2006-02-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMGYOUFINALLYWROTEITYAY! -breathes- Okay, THNAKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKOU! I was wondering when you'd get around to writing this, but im terribly sorry I haven't 'found' this sooner XD you have such a spontanious updating style that I only check every month or so, so im not in anticipation for like, ever! X3 You MUST update!

-shadow
Reviewer
2006-02-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseTHANKYOU! THANKYOU! THANKYOU! THANKYOU!

For writing the Don/Niall Story!

It looks very promising and I'm interested to see what happens next! =)
jessdarkwater
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuseERICA! I LOVE YOU!

/spazzing

However, *squeeing* is still in order. I'm so happy =D *dances* Can you tell?

DON IS BACK!

Sorry, I apologise for the fangirling but it's happy!Don and OMG so cool. I'm sure that there's something going on with Don's dad though... Hmm...
Collar de Espinas
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuseAh, how I've been looking forward to this story! It'll be great to be able to delve into Don's life more and it was great to see him actually happy in this first chapter!

Really looking forward to more (soon? Ish?).

...And I wish the baggage at Heathrow did come out quickly. Hmph.
ddz008
2006-02-07
ch 1,
abuseGreat chapter!I liked it, I imagine there's more to come, righ?So... Don is different and we got to meet his family! :DHope to see it updated pretty soon!
turtledonkey27
2006-02-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh, i'm glad you decided to write this. donovan was one of my favorites from the first story and i'd been curious to find out more about him and their summer visit together. i wonder what the deeper stories are going to be here, obviously the father will play a big part in it. can't wait for more :)
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