Please write more for this story!
Donovan's my favorite character, so it would make me very happy if you would update soon. I know it's been a while. . . and I hope you haven't given up on this story.

I am SO excited for the next chapter of this, you don't even know. I'm going to be like obsessively checking my email until it's posted, and then when I'm done reading it I'm going to have to go re-read the entire Book One and Book Two so that I can keep myself busy until the NEXT next chapter is posted.

Freak much? Yeah, that's me. Anywhoo... Yeah, this is sublime.

This is off to a great start, and I really want to read more! Please?

Ive fallen in love with your writing. Its got good structure and is gritty and its down-to-earth-nothings's-perfect-so-im-not-going-to-even-bother-attempting-to-lie-and-tell-you-it-is
attitude is really refreshing after being nearly drowned in a sea of fluff, searching for a good slash bording school story. I havent got a chance to comment on the other three or so stories in the series but this is pretty much what i would have said. ay forst i was really disapointed that threre were no true happy endings and there was no way so many people in one school could be ** up. then i starting thinking of my own life and the poepl i know and the issues they face and i realized that this wasnt so far-fetched. Its raw and real, just like life's ment to be. so thanks...for the wake up call.
Emily

I was wondering when you're going to update 'Beyond the Gossamer Veil'

I love Don, he's one of my favorite characters. I'm glad that he's doing better.

You should definately continue this story...

yay a new chapter! I'm so exicted for this story, ever since To Look Without Seeing started I've beed aching to know what happened XD

hehe, will Kevin be in the next chapter? The encounter looks promising ^_^v

-Satoru

love it

W00t, update :D

Write more on this story soon, in DYING to know what happened over Nialls vacation with Don.

-Shadow

Um, hi Erica, remember me? Your wife? Lover of all things Donovan?

You just committed a grievous crime.

Tell me what is wrong with this:

Niall + Donovan + bed = talking.

I'm sure you can now see the error of your ways. You must see that that sum is incorrect and you should in fact have gotten this:

Niall + Donovan + bed = hot boy!sex

See? You should.

Other than that, this chapter was lovely and *yay* a double update with this and Eldermoor. Now I just need my Luke and I'll be happy. Plus you need to camwhore a little on your journal please =D

Now I've just gotta figure what to get you for your birthday grr >=p

OMGYOUFINALLYWROTEITYAY! -breathes- Okay, THNAKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKOU! I was wondering when you'd get around to writing this, but im terribly sorry I haven't 'found' this sooner XD you have such a spontanious updating style that I only check every month or so, so im not in anticipation for like, ever! X3 You MUST update!

-shadow

THANKYOU! THANKYOU! THANKYOU! THANKYOU!

For writing the Don/Niall Story!

It looks very promising and I'm interested to see what happens next! =)

ERICA! I LOVE YOU!

/spazzing

However, *squeeing* is still in order. I'm so happy =D *dances* Can you tell?

DON IS BACK!

Sorry, I apologise for the fangirling but it's happy!Don and OMG so cool. I'm sure that there's something going on with Don's dad though... Hmm...

Ah, how I've been looking forward to this story! It'll be great to be able to delve into Don's life more and it was great to see him actually happy in this first chapter!

Really looking forward to more (soon? Ish?).

...And I wish the baggage at Heathrow did come out quickly. Hmph.

Great chapter!I liked it, I imagine there's more to come, righ?So... Don is different and we got to meet his family! :DHope to see it updated pretty soon!