|Reviews for Death Becomes Her|
| His Mercy's Waiting 2/15/08 . chapter 1
Once again, I congratulate you on your incredibly smooth flow. I like your style I lot. ;)
| violetsky23 11/14/06 . chapter 1
wow. you managed to rhyme non-cheesily! congrats, not too many do. i like how there is no clenching line saying "ok, it's done".
| the naked civil servant 3/3/06 . chapter 1
a sort of delicate simplicity that portends much anxiety & suppressed hysteria - that forced-calm feeling. gorgeous poem.
| ii 2/12/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect. Great job.
| chaos called creation 2/8/06 . chapter 1
There's almost a twist of irony in the ending. Good work
| poemkitten7 2/7/06 . chapter 1
Wow! I love the varied vocabulary and the rhythm. Incredible cool; it gave me this clear picture of a dead body. *shivers* Keep it up!
| SerialXLain 2/7/06 . chapter 1
Whoa. This. Is. Amazing. I love the rhythm of it, your rhyming is beautifully done-not forced or too much...I am jealous.