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Reviews For: Death Becomes Her

His Mercy's Waiting
2008-02-15
ch 1,
Once again, I congratulate you on your incredibly smooth flow. I like your style I lot. ;)

Keep writing!
violetsky23
2006-11-14
ch 1,
wow. you managed to rhyme non-cheesily! congrats, not too many do. i like how there is no clenching line saying "ok, it's done".
the naked civil servant
2006-03-03
ch 1,
a sort of delicate simplicity that portends much anxiety & suppressed hysteria - that forced-calm feeling. gorgeous poem.
ii
2006-02-12
ch 1,
Beautiful. Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect. Great job.
chaos called creation
2006-02-08
ch 1,
There's almost a twist of irony in the ending. Good work
poemkitten7
2006-02-07
ch 1,
Wow! I love the varied vocabulary and the rhythm. Incredible cool; it gave me this clear picture of a dead body. *shivers* ^^ Keep it up!!
SerialXLain
2006-02-07
ch 1,
Whoa. This. Is. Amazing. I love the rhythm of it, your rhyming is beautifully done--not forced or too much...I am jealous.

Love xox

Great poem
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