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| His Mercy's Waiting 2008-02-15 ch 1, | Once again, I congratulate you on your incredibly smooth flow. I like your style I lot. ;) Keep writing! |
| violetsky23 2006-11-14 ch 1, | wow. you managed to rhyme non-cheesily! congrats, not too many do. i like how there is no clenching line saying "ok, it's done". |
| the naked civil servant 2006-03-03 ch 1, | a sort of delicate simplicity that portends much anxiety & suppressed hysteria - that forced-calm feeling. gorgeous poem. |
| ii 2006-02-12 ch 1, | Beautiful. Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect. Great job. |
| chaos called creation 2006-02-08 ch 1, | There's almost a twist of irony in the ending. Good work |
| poemkitten7 2006-02-07 ch 1, | Wow! I love the varied vocabulary and the rhythm. Incredible cool; it gave me this clear picture of a dead body. *shivers* ^^ Keep it up!! |
| SerialXLain 2006-02-07 ch 1, | Whoa. This. Is. Amazing. I love the rhythm of it, your rhyming is beautifully done--not forced or too much...I am jealous. Love xox Great poem |