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lacking motivation 2006-06-13 . chapter 1
perhaps this in one issue that you feel rather strongly about. i like it even if i'm not partial to poems that rhyme. the glories of high school, glad that that's over with now.
Colin 2006-03-11 . chapter 1
Good
acheron love 2006-02-13 . chapter 1
i swear to goodness. your poems are amazing. and i love how you throw all of it out there, and just pull it in at the end. this is so amazing even if it is a rant.
classic violet 2006-02-11 . chapter 1
Interesting. Great title!
Prophetic Vixen 2006-02-09 . chapter 1
I really like it, but I have one problem with it..."the **, the stoners and the drunks" you seem to be implying that it's the girls that are screwing the guys over, not the other way around. Keep that in mind: a guy who gets laid by six different girls is a pimp, he's cool as ice...but the girl? Who did it once with a boy she thought she loved, she's the **? Sorry, I know you didn't mean it like that, and this is really well written. I like the ABAB rhyming and how consistant it is. Good job.
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