... i keep reading, and i always wistfully sigh afterwards...

short and beautifully written

Tastes like tequila. Yeah, hon, savor the burn. Lovely.

every word counts... perfectly balanced... LOVE IT!

short and sweet

I'm left puzzling over, "Petunias fervent in her soul". The rest I'm already dazzled by.

"lipstick in the rim" sounds so haiku-ish ending, really. oh, and i loved it; "twirled too much love" is such a beautiful opening line. i swear, the whole thing could have killed me.

* noelle

i love it, the depth, the intensity and the feelings radiating from it, well done!

reminds me of absinthe for some reason.

then again a lot of things remind me of absinthe.

great job.

x3x3

nice, i admire the way you create whole scenes in so few words. i really like the idea of 'love in a cup', as if it must be controlled, stirred to perfection. thanks again.

wow... WOW, i LOVE the way this is written, its so beautiful, short but saying everything, love it.

This I really enjoyed reading, love your stuff. Keep writing.

a little piece but it's dynamite. every single word is beautiful- just pops off the page. gorgeous.

petunias fervent in her soul- you leave me breathless sometimes, really.

reminds me of romeo and juliet

-speechless- it's poems like this that remind me why i love you.