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| Holly Rose E 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuse... i keep reading, and i always wistfully sigh afterwards... |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseshort and beautifully written |
| addie pray 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseTastes like tequila. Yeah, hon, savor the burn. Lovely. |
| beti213 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseevery word counts... perfectly balanced... LOVE IT! |
| Erik Queen 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseshort and sweet |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI'm left puzzling over, "Petunias fervent in her soul". The rest I'm already dazzled by. |
| poetic abortion 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuse"lipstick in the rim" sounds so haiku-ish ending, really. oh, and i loved it; "twirled too much love" is such a beautiful opening line. i swear, the whole thing could have killed me. ~* noelle |
| AllyCred 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abusei love it, the depth, the intensity and the feelings radiating from it, well done!! |
| re x invented 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abusereminds me of absinthe for some reason. then again a lot of things remind me of absinthe. great job. x3x3 |
| astral boy 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abusenice, i admire the way you create whole scenes in so few words. i really like the idea of 'love in a cup', as if it must be controlled, stirred to perfection. thanks again. |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abusewow... WOW, i LOVE the way this is written, its so beautiful, short but saying everything, love it. |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThis I really enjoyed reading, love your stuff. Keep writing. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abusea little piece but it's dynamite. every single word is beautiful-- just pops off the page. gorgeous. |
| Aquafied 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abusepetunias fervent in her soul- you leave me breathless sometimes, really. reminds me of romeo and juliet |
| a lonely september 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuse-speechless- it's poems like this that remind me why i love you. |