|Reviews for crushed to begin with|
| Holly Rose E 4/6/06 . chapter 1
... i keep reading, and i always wistfully sigh afterwards...
| simpleplan13 3/23/06 . chapter 1
short and beautifully written
| addie pray 2/20/06 . chapter 1
Tastes like tequila. Yeah, hon, savor the burn. Lovely.
| beti213 2/12/06 . chapter 1
every word counts... perfectly balanced... LOVE IT!
| Erik Queen 2/10/06 . chapter 1
short and sweet
| dollface and her cancer 2/9/06 . chapter 1
I'm left puzzling over, "Petunias fervent in her soul". The rest I'm already dazzled by.
| poetic abortion 2/9/06 . chapter 1
"lipstick in the rim" sounds so haiku-ish ending, really. oh, and i loved it; "twirled too much love" is such a beautiful opening line. i swear, the whole thing could have killed me.
| AllyCred 2/9/06 . chapter 1
i love it, the depth, the intensity and the feelings radiating from it, well done!
| re x invented 2/9/06 . chapter 1
reminds me of absinthe for some reason.
then again a lot of things remind me of absinthe.
| astral boy 2/9/06 . chapter 1
nice, i admire the way you create whole scenes in so few words. i really like the idea of 'love in a cup', as if it must be controlled, stirred to perfection. thanks again.
| Pink Sparrow 2/8/06 . chapter 1
wow... WOW, i LOVE the way this is written, its so beautiful, short but saying everything, love it.
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2/8/06 . chapter 1
This I really enjoyed reading, love your stuff. Keep writing.
| White Tea and Ginger 2/8/06 . chapter 1
a little piece but it's dynamite. every single word is beautiful- just pops off the page. gorgeous.
| Aquafied 2/8/06 . chapter 1
petunias fervent in her soul- you leave me breathless sometimes, really.
reminds me of romeo and juliet
| a lonely september 2/8/06 . chapter 1
-speechless- it's poems like this that remind me why i love you.