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Holly Rose E
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuse... i keep reading, and i always wistfully sigh afterwards...
simpleplan13
2006-03-23
ch 1,
abuseshort and beautifully written
addie pray
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abuseTastes like tequila. Yeah, hon, savor the burn. Lovely.
beti213
2006-02-12
ch 1,
abuseevery word counts... perfectly balanced... LOVE IT!
Erik Queen
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseshort and sweet
dollface and her cancer
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abuseI'm left puzzling over, "Petunias fervent in her soul". The rest I'm already dazzled by.
poetic abortion
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abuse"lipstick in the rim" sounds so haiku-ish ending, really. oh, and i loved it; "twirled too much love" is such a beautiful opening line. i swear, the whole thing could have killed me.

~* noelle
AllyCred
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abusei love it, the depth, the intensity and the feelings radiating from it, well done!!
re x invented
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abusereminds me of absinthe for some reason.

then again a lot of things remind me of absinthe.

great job.

x3x3
astral boy
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abusenice, i admire the way you create whole scenes in so few words. i really like the idea of 'love in a cup', as if it must be controlled, stirred to perfection. thanks again.
Pink Sparrow
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abusewow... WOW, i LOVE the way this is written, its so beautiful, short but saying everything, love it.
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuseThis I really enjoyed reading, love your stuff. Keep writing.
White Tea and Ginger
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abusea little piece but it's dynamite. every single word is beautiful-- just pops off the page. gorgeous.
Aquafied
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abusepetunias fervent in her soul- you leave me breathless sometimes, really.

reminds me of romeo and juliet
a lonely september
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuse-speechless- it's poems like this that remind me why i love you.
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