like it so far. and i really want to know who sarah really is. please put up the next chater soon.

"He never saw it coming."

"He felt like he was just hit with a sledge hammer."

I'm getting really tired of Dai being nothing but a wimp interested only in scoring with Cooper. Oh, btw, hitting someone in the face like that ought to have hurt Cooper's knuckles.

I like spies stories... However, this one has, IMHO, a rather large and irritating flaw; Cooper distincly comes across as a Mary Sue. She's just 17, she's a very skilled agent, very beautiful, very confident, haunted by her past, etc. etc. She seems to be perfect, and I find perfect characters very difficult to empathize with (in point of fact, I usually wish them a swift demise).

So far Dai only seems to be around to witness how cool she is. I know, that's likely to change in the next chapters, but the fact that he can't seem to get the better of her at *anything* is annoying. Also annoying is how she keeps calling him "kid." She's only two years older.

Anyway, my advice would be to give her at least one visible flaw in the early chapters, just to show the reader that she's not perfect.

Gah!! Add another chapter!!

*blink* what?? she DIED?? NOO!! eep!

Dang, great ending though...

gyah. Cooper. I LIKED her... *sigh*

Ah well.

:) CD

... MORE! WRITE MORE! YOU GOTTA WRITE A SEQUEL!

one of the BEST stories i have ever read on fictionpress! EVER!

i have also read your Power Within stories and they are just as good as this!

plz write more quickly!

cant stand the suspense!

piranah!!

GAH!! CLIFFIE!! *is on edge of seat*

:D CD

GAH!! *attacks Poseidon*

:) CD

Really Good. I like the fact that the main action takes place on an island, for some reason that adds a sense of mystery to it. It would be cool if there was something under the island, like a huge factory that makes the virus, I don't know.

You've got all the ingredients for a really good story. I like your characters - Cooper is a classic heroine with attitude. It would make a good film or screenplay as you write in a very visual way. Keep it up

GAAH!! FREEAKY!!

*leans forward in anticipation*

:) CD

oo...two chapters! fun!

woah...cool...