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| EC11 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's good...if you want to submit this one you should do some editing to make it flow a little better... Hey, check out some of my stuff...i finally put all of it on FP, so it's there...the never stuff is in the end chapters of my stuff, cuz i don't like to post them individually...thanks, Nelson |
| Paste on Smile 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseA very nice poem. The imagery is beautiful. Some cliche parts, but hey, I'm guilty of that, too. But I really enjoyed this piece. |
| gabriellafaith 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseAw. It's so depressing, and yet, strangely beautiful. I love your style. gabriellafaith |