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Reviews For: Wings

xCorix 2006-09-17 ch 3,	abuseit's not over yet... so ominous! oh wow i just checked the date and realized i must have picked the hiatused story. skills i've got.
xCorix 2006-09-17 ch 1,	abuseoh sounds very interesting. i'll be reading the next two chapters around RIGHT NOW. thanks soo much for your nice nice review. however the story will make more sense if you first read Mafia Ghost. it won't make a big big difference, but the people mentioned are much more explained.
The Magnificent Fuschia 2006-08-26 ch 3,	abuseHey! Wow - what a story! I chose this one to read out of all your works because it intrigued me...and I was right! I like your style of writing: it's very precise and immediate. Only one thing (maybe this is just me...it's very early in the morning here, just before I go to work...) but I wasn't entirely sure when the story went back in time, and I was wondering about continuity...maybe a little more than the line to indicate a time change. Other than that, I really liked the story, and I hope you continue with it: both the subject matter and the way you deal with it are enthralling, and I like the character of Amiee. Thank you for the review on WestEnders, and in answer, "gawped" is probably just slang, but it's a word over here (England)! Thank you very much for the review :D Okay, continue with this story...on the edge of my seat! ~~TMF~~
Rehy 2006-06-11 ch 3,	abuseVery interesting... I like it. You should update soon! Lapotorus P.S. chapter 2 is up.
snicket*fire 2006-02-17 ch 3, anon.	abusethose ** are f-ing CRAZY! dear Lordy God Almighty! i believe the word is "therapy" and they all need it VERY BADLY! you should have alex higher some psycho guy who beds all those damn crazy women and then when THEY'RE asleep, he kills them and mangles their stupid little bodies OR he keeps them alive and pulls a hannibal move by making them eat their own fingers or something! HELL YEA! that's what i'm talking about. i liked it, though. good job! although i am still a tad confused
thescottishdragpm 2006-02-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseCREEPY! CREEPY! CREEPY! Wow! That's awesome! I love it so much! great descriptions, only one error you said moth instead of both. lol! only problem! Great and I can't wait for the update!
thescottishdragon 2006-02-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseCan't log in because I'm supposd to be writing an assignment, and I've only got about an hour to do, and I haven't really started! But this story is way more intersting! Wow I love it! I'm so glad you updated this fast! I didn't think I could wait too long for the next update! It's really great! Alex is a great character and already has a hurt (yay wounded characters are great!) I wonder about the end though, I think it's really interesting, and the fact that yuo keep "her" ambiguous is wonderful. I'm left to assume it's Amiee and Alex's brother discussed here, but the fact that its uncertain is great! Wonderful! And I'd write more on this review, but I still have 7 more pages to write on this assignment! Can't wait till next time! The Scottish Dragon
words music and love stay t... 2006-02-08 ch 1,	abuseVery good! Very intersting! And the characters are compelling, even if Amiee is a bit of a...well beyond a murderer...we won't go there. Very good, I hope you plan to continue it, I don't know exactly how...but hey, that's not my job! lol! I'm glad to see you're finally back! It's been son long! I've missed you! Much lof, The Scottish Dragon

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