Wow... this is beautiful.

Wow.

It's heartbreaking and true and enigmatic and all so beautiful I'm lost in it. I love it.

This was great! I like the feel and flow of the story. It reads like a children's book, but with mature themes. I would love to see this with illustrations. (Sorry, I have a love of children's literature that's not really children't literature)

Have you ever read Green Angel? I don't remember the author, but you might want to look for it. It's got the same feel to it.

Interesting. Childish innocence, but soemhow stronger.

that was just bloody brilliant! love ur style :P simple and sweet. keep it up ya!

this...doesnt have any reviwes yet? some people are just weird. ;)

anyway:: I really really REALLY like this story. just enough sort of imagery to get the picture without total,y lowing over. And I think its good how nobody seems to have a "real" name.

Very nice.