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| sunflowersing 2007-03-26 ch 4,  | abuseHAHAHAHAHA! I laughed so hard I nearly cried when Charday called out to Pryene. I felt embarassed reading it. That very good when the reader can feel the characters. I'm STILL smiling as I type this! Excellent writing! sunflowersing |
| sunflowersing 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far! :-D sunflowersing |
| aferdeity 2006-05-19 ch 8, | abuseNo! ** I cn't beleive it! how can yo be so cruel!? |
| Reader 2006-05-14 ch 8, anon. | abuseI love you story. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Cat (: 2006-05-07 ch 7, anon. | abusePlease for goodness sack update I love this story and i'm not a forbiden love kind of person. Keep writing! |
| aferdeity 2006-03-31 ch 7, | abuseO an afai a tored affair naghty adrin. well i hate karessa so she deserves it. hate her. well anyways please update i was starting to think you had givn up the story |
| aferdeity 2006-03-16 ch 6, | abuseNo! Pry hasto accept Adrian the others are stupic I want Adrian to win! WHy is she so stuborn? |
| WootWoot 2006-03-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseI love your stories because they can be simple and somewhat complex. |
| aferdeity 2006-02-11 ch 5, | abuseThat **! she needs to burn in hell. How could she do this. Pryene seems to be a little more willig now though. I hope the lie isn' a way for him t get married when he finds out Pryene is getting men to cour her. |
| aferdeity 2006-02-10 ch 4, | abuseTHIS IS GETTING TO BE A REALLY COOL STORY. Pry better stop being so damn resistant |
| Eboni 2006-02-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseWell, it appears Charday is a real brat. I see Pryene has sent for suitors and I know its going to cause trouble. Update soon. |
| Eboni 2006-02-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseI thought it was funny when Preyene dropped kicked Adrian. I feel like I'm really getting to know Adrian and who he is, but I hope to get to know Preyene's thoughts as the story progresses. |
| Eboni 2006-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story so far. Pryene is a storng heroine which I like and Adrian is laid back which makes a good foil to her. |