Is that it? Please, don't tell me this s the end. There mut be more!
Ot rminds me somewhat of Brianna and Brad from CH. Except I actually like this couple.
Please please update soon.

HAHAHAHAHA! I laughed so hard I nearly cried when Charday called out to Pryene. I felt embarassed reading it. That very good when the reader can feel the characters. I'm STILL smiling as I type this! Excellent writing!

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I like it so far! :-D

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No! ** I cn't beleive it! how can yo be so cruel!?

I love you story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please for goodness sack update I love this story and i'm not a forbiden love kind of person. Keep writing!

O an afai a tored affair naghty adrin. well i hate karessa so she deserves it. hate her. well anyways please update i was starting to think you had givn up the story

No! Pry hasto accept Adrian the others are stupic I want Adrian to win! WHy is she so stuborn?

I love your stories because they can be simple and somewhat complex.

That **! she needs to burn in hell. How could she do this. Pryene seems to be a little more willig now though. I hope the lie isn' a way for him t get married when he finds out Pryene is getting men to cour her.

THIS IS GETTING TO BE A REALLY COOL STORY. Pry better stop being so damn resistant

Well, it appears Charday is a real brat. I see Pryene has sent for suitors and I know its going to cause trouble. Update soon.

I thought it was funny when Preyene dropped kicked Adrian. I feel like I'm really getting to know Adrian and who he is, but I hope to get to know Preyene's thoughts as the story progresses.

I love this story so far. Pryene is a storng heroine which I like and Adrian is laid back which makes a good foil to her.