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gleee 2008-01-08 . chapter 1
that was gorgeous...
your imagery is amazing!!
Coloured Raindrops 2006-07-28 . chapter 1
I miss this one... weird. Well, I'm here to review. So.

It was beautiful. Gorgeous. Marvelous. Fantastic.And I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier.
the-game-of-life 2006-06-11 . chapter 1
this could be a song
star blanket river child 2006-02-12 . chapter 1
Wow... "did you see me cry, doll? can you let me fall, doll?" Perfect flow. "flying through your mood swings, I’m not going anywhere, because this is where I stand." Painfully true... I just love the emotions. "on sunny days, you wore the stars" Beautiful. Love the ending, too. Just fantastic, I love it. Keep writing.
lessons you learn 2006-02-09 . chapter 1
wow, Ella. "crashing down the stairwell," lol, that reminded me of when I threw my ipod down the stairs at the beach and broke it. :) Well gorgeous as always, keep it up. I love your writing.
evm 2006-02-09 . chapter 1
gorgeous; i love the rythym of your words. but, you might want to change 'what this have to do with love' to 'what's this have to do with love'. that's what you intended, right?
esther electric 2006-02-09 . chapter 1
no one writes like you honey
cripple blackbird 2006-02-09 . chapter 1
wow

That was very strong! And very beautiful.

And I definetly can picture it all.
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