 Naked Penguin Fetus For Pope 2007-10-08 . chapter 3OH MY GOD.
WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NOW!?
WHEN ARE AIDEN AND CHASE GONNA **?
CAN WE SEE MORE OF THE TEACHER?
IS AIDEN STAYING WITH THEM?
WHY WAS CHASE IN A COMA?
IS THIS STORY GONNA GO ANYWHERE?
ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE?
IS IT ALL A DREAM AND CHASE IS IMAGINING EVERYTHING?
OMG. THAT WOULD BE A GOOD TURN OF EVENTS!
UPDATE SOON!
YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN,
xoxoNPF!! |
 SerialXLain 2007-05-12 . chapter 3So since I don't really remember what happened the past two chapters... er...
Hot collar. DOES IT STAND FOR SEX KITTEN!?
AUNT MAY IS A **. ;-; "That boy is a **" made me giggle though.
;)
xo
LYKE ZOMFG UPDATE SOON KAY?!?! LAWL |
 Love Eternally 2007-05-09 . chapter 3Wow. YAY! You updated. Finally. I can't wait for more. Poor Aiden, his mom needs shot. . . |
 Esquirella 2007-05-07 . chapter 3I really like this story! |
 inxyourxeyes 2007-05-06 . chapter 3Hey. Glad to see you're working on this story again. The story line seems interesting so I'd like it to continue ^^. lol. Um, didn't seem to NEED the proof read, so you're save.
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 magalina 2007-05-06 . chapter 3Wow, I was surprised when I saw this updated o.O It´s great that you´re still writing!! Update soon, Aiden sound naughty :P |
 Love Eternally 2007-03-14 . chapter 2AWesome story. Loved it. Why haven't you updated? |
 love.strawberries 2006-08-12 . chapter 2Okay, like, now I'm REALLy hooked. And oh, by the way? Yeah, Aiden's totally hot and I claim him as mine.
Actually, in one of my original fics that I'm NEVER going to post online because I'm scared someone will steal my idea, one of the boys is named Aiden... And he also has blue eyes... Scary, huh? ANd the other boy, Aiden's "signifigant other", is named Jayce... Aiden and Chase, Aiden and Jayce? Is it just me, or do you feel chills?
You haven't updated this since MARCH? No no no no no, you better update NOW! If I don't find out more about Chase and Aiden, I'll DIE... |
 love.strawberries 2006-08-12 . chapter 1SO, since you've reviwed like, EVERYTHING of mine, I used my special stalker skills to find your FP accont, so I could return the favor!
Anyways, on to the review... I realy like the way this starts, you defiently have got me hooked. I wanna know EVERYTHING, like why Chase was in a coma, who's the pretty little boy, what about this cousin...? That's a perfect way to get people to read your stuff, you pile up so many questions on them so that if they don't get them answered, they *explode*!
And don't worry that you're only 13, well 14 now. If you love to write, it'll show through in your writing, no matter hwat age. (Gosh, don't I just sound so old and knowledgeable? XP)
Anyways, sorry for the crazy-long review, I'm off to read the next chapter! |
 magalina 2006-06-28 . chapter 2Haha! I liked it! Please update soon! |
 YourloverAKAKatyAKAIbetyoudidntknowyouweremylover 2006-03-30 . chapter 2 So. I read this awhile ago but forgot to review. DUNDUNDUN! ITS HIM! WET DREAM BOY!
aharhar |
 parasitic pathos 2006-03-26 . chapter 2This made me laugh which makes me feel bad but the only reason why i laughed was beause of the plump and sopping and yeah...
so...my ** is plump and my underwear are sopping wet because ive been thinking about you naked...
just kidding.
youre the boy in my dreams too sugar.
wait youre not a boy
i called you sugar...
matt |
 HEIDI CHRISTOPHER 2006-02-17 . chapter 1 HEY RACHIZZLE YOUR STORY SEEMS REAL INTERESTING.PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER UP OVER FEBRUARY VACATION.PEACE |
 Inherent 2006-02-09 . chapter 1You posted it! Yay! I really like this, just like I said before. I still say it's flowy even if you think that sounds funny. Anyways...I should end this review since I need to get ready for le school. Le sigh. |
 SerialXLain 2006-02-09 . chapter 1Well...when you're in a coma, doesn't your life just freeze? Like when you wake up, you think everything's the same as before... So wouldn't Chase remember his cousin? Sorry...I'm nit-picky.
Well...I'm wondering where this is going. I love cousincest. And twincest. I want to write a story about twincest, and I'm writing one with cousincest...and had a short story with cousincest. Yay. Incest is the best thing ever created...
Love xox |