Aww.. " nice job in bringing out the emotions. Although you might want to change 'Can't stop to miss you' to 'Can't stop missing you'? -shrug-

Very touching piece. I think you meant "soar" not sore. Beautiful write. I sent you an invite to my site. Hope to see you there. Keep up the awesome work. Thank you for all the kind reviews.

Aw that was such a tear jerker. I loved it, and it was so sad. I could feel all of your emotions just by reading this, and if you can accomplish that then you're doing an outstanding job.