YAY Chapter 2! I really like Ishelyn's character. I didn't like her much in the first story. IDK, I guess I just felt she was going against everything Aelyn was trying for but now, after seeing into her mind etc, I understand a little more and therefore like her better now lol.

I don't know why it's taken so long but I recently reread Aelyn's Story (for like, the 6th time) and decided I needed to read the sequel. Yay for chapter 1! I like it so far! Now onto chapter 2...

Praying for you, your family and your friends. May God give you the strength and peace to get you through this difficult time. Just wanted to drop you a line and tell you that your and excellent writer and i pray for all the best for you

hiya

great chapter. :) hope you are coming back. i see its been a while since you posted. please come back. i really want to know how it finishs

angel

great chapter :)

hope things are going ok for you. i saw a review that you were haveing a hard time. Hope its better now.

angel

hiya

wow great chapter. can't wait to read the rest. keep going please i want to know how it ends :)

you are a really skilled writer.

angel

Genna! Genna! I meant Genna! My sister's name is Gemma, and I am currently in a state of panic and worry about certain choices of hers and made an automatic mistake. I'm so sorry! (Also for taking up an entire review to explain that.)

Welcome back. I am very sorry to hear about everything that has been happening and want to apologize for bugging you quite so many times to continue the story. I feel awful about that.

I hope everything gets well with Gemma and your friend. I will definitely keep you all in my thoughts. Good luck, and remember that a lot of us are here to help in any way we can.

This is incredible!

I loved Aelyn's Story, and I love this, with the contrast between the two sisters!

I only found one mistake... but it's incredibly tiny. Where Aelyn pulls out her cloth, you put an "S" instead of "C".

GREAT JOB!

I really hope you can find it in you to keep writing, because this is turning out amazing.

I hope your family stays safe and your friend's health improves. Keep smiling. :

Well, I hope everything will be alright for you in the end...I know it's probably hard, but as an objective stranger all I can say is that, well, anything that doesn't kill you only makes you stronger. Best of luck!

please contine this story! i stayed up till 2am tonight to read this, I was so drawn into it. Ishelyn anis an amazing character, shes admirable but real at the same time. I can't wait to find out more of her journey. You are a really talented writer. I hope that with juggling everything you will still have time for yourself. Best wishes.

aww no worries man, u do wat u have to and keep it real.

I was just thinking about this story the other day and how much I missed it. I'm truly sorry for all of the stuff you've been going through and I hope that everything turns out ok. It would be great if you could post another chapter, but I can understand how hard it must be. So, I'll try to be patient:)

I am writing this review not only to tell you that I am in love with this story (and Kristram) but also to beg and plead that you continue it. It has been a year since you posted the last chapter, and I (along with many others) am dying to read more.

Please please please! when are you going to finish the story?

lol and yes, I was skeptical at the idea of Ishelyn and Kristam together at first...I didn't really like the idea, but now I'm starting to warm to it more. You still have a bit of winning over to do though ;)