|Reviews for In the Shadow of My Sister|
| Scarlet MacDuff 9/9/08 . chapter 2
YAY Chapter 2! I really like Ishelyn's character. I didn't like her much in the first story. IDK, I guess I just felt she was going against everything Aelyn was trying for but now, after seeing into her mind etc, I understand a little more and therefore like her better now lol.
| Scarlet MacDuff 9/9/08 . chapter 1
I don't know why it's taken so long but I recently reread Aelyn's Story (for like, the 6th time) and decided I needed to read the sequel. Yay for chapter 1! I like it so far! Now onto chapter 2...
| noodless 5/3/08 . chapter 9
Praying for you, your family and your friends. May God give you the strength and peace to get you through this difficult time. Just wanted to drop you a line and tell you that your and excellent writer and i pray for all the best for you
| Angel-Leigh Jones 4/20/08 . chapter 9
great chapter. :) hope you are coming back. i see its been a while since you posted. please come back. i really want to know how it finishs
| Angel-Leigh Jones 4/20/08 . chapter 4
great chapter :)
hope things are going ok for you. i saw a review that you were haveing a hard time. Hope its better now.
| Angel-Leigh Jones 4/20/08 . chapter 1
wow great chapter. can't wait to read the rest. keep going please i want to know how it ends :)
you are a really skilled writer.
| greenGalilee 9/14/07 . chapter 7
Genna! Genna! I meant Genna! My sister's name is Gemma, and I am currently in a state of panic and worry about certain choices of hers and made an automatic mistake. I'm so sorry! (Also for taking up an entire review to explain that.)
| greenGalilee 9/14/07 . chapter 9
Welcome back. I am very sorry to hear about everything that has been happening and want to apologize for bugging you quite so many times to continue the story. I feel awful about that.
I hope everything gets well with Gemma and your friend. I will definitely keep you all in my thoughts. Good luck, and remember that a lot of us are here to help in any way we can.
| Emma Lake 9/12/07 . chapter 9
This is incredible!
I loved Aelyn's Story, and I love this, with the contrast between the two sisters!
I only found one mistake... but it's incredibly tiny. Where Aelyn pulls out her cloth, you put an "S" instead of "C".
I really hope you can find it in you to keep writing, because this is turning out amazing.
I hope your family stays safe and your friend's health improves. Keep smiling. :
| cherrypiesizzle 9/8/07 . chapter 9
Well, I hope everything will be alright for you in the end...I know it's probably hard, but as an objective stranger all I can say is that, well, anything that doesn't kill you only makes you stronger. Best of luck!
| naivete chica 9/8/07 . chapter 9
please contine this story! i stayed up till 2am tonight to read this, I was so drawn into it. Ishelyn anis an amazing character, shes admirable but real at the same time. I can't wait to find out more of her journey. You are a really talented writer. I hope that with juggling everything you will still have time for yourself. Best wishes.
| toxic-noodle725 9/5/07 . chapter 9
aww no worries man, u do wat u have to and keep it real.
| euphorictragedy 9/4/07 . chapter 9
I was just thinking about this story the other day and how much I missed it. I'm truly sorry for all of the stuff you've been going through and I hope that everything turns out ok. It would be great if you could post another chapter, but I can understand how hard it must be. So, I'll try to be patient:)
| your biggest fan ever 9/1/07 . chapter 8
I am writing this review not only to tell you that I am in love with this story (and Kristram) but also to beg and plead that you continue it. It has been a year since you posted the last chapter, and I (along with many others) am dying to read more.
Please please please! when are you going to finish the story?
| cherrypiesizzle 7/14/07 . chapter 7
lol and yes, I was skeptical at the idea of Ishelyn and Kristam together at first...I didn't really like the idea, but now I'm starting to warm to it more. You still have a bit of winning over to do though ;)