Wow... thats awesome... Love it.. Nice job, keep it up Fi.

I really like it. yes, it is borderline emo at times but I like the way it's not about anger at the conformity, but anger at the conformity to the nonconformity, which has always pissed me off more than conformity itself. Keep up the amazing work!

Really good, your rhyme schemes a bit of a mess but still that doesnt matter. It JUST MAKES SO MUCH SENSE. I luv u sophie. read some of mine, your welcome to say its complete and utter crap. (im aprilfool )

i love the rhyme and rhythm of this. especially the bit where it says 'the one who, just like all the rest, can't seem to sleep at night'. this works really well, and comes together perfectly. great job.