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| W. Griffin 2008-08-01 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Great job! I like the repetition of shall, and especially line #3! Please R&R, W. Griffin |
| Jules Kelly 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI commend you for doing a poem about what's wrong with the world from a more Christian point-of-view. It's a subject that has become pretty "emoized." So, it's refreshing to read something as true as this. |