LOL! That's depressing...Good words, and I like how you have only his focused description in the beginning to show that the narrator likes him too. Cool.

I dream that my crush will do that too. This was nicely writen.

very funny. i like the ending.

Wow.

That is so cool. Sad, yes, but excellently done. Don't you hate it when you think you're in the real world, but find out it was nothing but a dream? I sure do.

Please continue to write this wonderful poetry!

Love,~ Cactus

I can't tell you how many times I've had that exact same dream. Someday it won't be a dream though...

nicely done :D