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Rachel Evans
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseWow. That's a great reminder that we really shouldn't judge people too quickly. My favorite part was the,"Now you see her,And you judge.Say she's dirty,A **,Addicted to drugs."

I think that's what many of us assume when we see someone like that. Thanks for a powerful reminder that not everyone will fit into the stereotypes that society creates.

I love you! *invisihug*
chaos called creation
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abuseI actually had a picture book flipping through my mind as I read this. Maybe, because it's so honest. Good way of ending it, keep writing
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