It sounds like one of those stories that are passed down from generation to generation. [That's a compliment!] Anyways, great job!

Hey! I like this story lots, it should grow to be an awesome story. Valley of Four Winds , anyways, aweshome!

So cute! There were some grammar/spelling mistakes, and the revealing of the identity of the "old man" could've used a little fleshing out, but otherwise it's publishing quality. Good work.

This story is very cool :) It is an excelent fairy tale Meghan, I quite enjoyed it. Keep up the good work bluebird!

Quite nice.

An interesting story. I like it.