Thanks for reviewing - and liking - my story. :) I'll try and update it as soon as possble. Keep reading!

Your writing is really great. I love this poem. Its awesome.

Meaningful little poem, i like the emphasis through the vacancy of sugar in bitter fields. Nice work, keep writing!

It’s kind of like living in a place so great that everyone else wants to come here, but the reality is that underneath everything else we’re just as bad as everyone else. The world is corrupt - there aren’t even rocks to hide under anymore. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.