Reviews for Moonlight, Cold Moonlight

sarah1491 2006-10-07 ch 1,	abuseYay! I love this poem! ;)
Genevieve Straessley 2006-09-15 ch 1,	abuseOh Redeemed. this poem gives me chills. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talents...
Kenny's Friend 2006-02-17 ch 7,	abuseKeep it coming! Good crescendo, nice developement. Is this the end of the ballad, or is there more to come? Keep writing!
Kenny's Friend 2006-02-15 ch 6,	abuseAside from a few places where there were awkward spaces between stanzas (namely this chapter and chapter 5), there was absolutely nothing wrong with this. It was awesome, man. Your poetic whim has come in pretty strong, my friend. Below is a stanza I particularly appreciated: "A tavern of flora,Wrapped ‘round a throne.Here rests the queen,Rigid as stone. I sink to my knees,And lower my gaze.My blood pounds my veins;My heart burns ablaze. She whispers my name,And so I obey.I take her light handAnd there I will stay." Keep writing!
Kenny's Friend 2006-02-15 ch 5,	abuseOnce again, good job - good rhyming, good progression. Keep it up!
Kenny's Friend 2006-02-10 ch 2,	abuseOh - metaphors. I love metaphors. Great work - again. I like the progression, I like the sound of it, I like how it's mysterious, and yet if you get the first clue you grasp the whole meaning. Very good, my friend. Keep writing!
Friggin Awesome 2006-02-09 ch 1,	abuseIm Awed. I cant speak...