Creative. A different point of view...Cute but incredibly sad. I am not sure that I fully understood it but I think I did. Sad but very good. =]

Hey, I like the poem. I have a story named after this but yeah.. I saw the name and thought " hey!"... Good poem and keep writing!

This is a poem, not a story. Please move it to the appropriate section.

I like the concept. A lot actually. Not bad at all. I'm going to favorite it.