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| kingrankar76 2007-10-17 ch 1,  | abusehey u should definitely keep this story.i love it. |
| Gypsy Pink 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWhat are winter perfumes? I like Penny even if she's pretty, a cheerleader and most likely your average blonde-bombshell-bimbo (who just isn't blonde in this case!) |
| aTaintedTouch. 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea of a cheerleader being thrown into a group of nerds. It's very original. I would like.. no LOVE to see what would come out of this story. Keep up the good work. (: |
| twistedFAerieTALes 2006-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuselol. i guess she's a 'lucky penny' lol. |
| arachibutyrophobia 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abusekeep it. “I’m James.” Said the boy. “I’m Penny,” she said. Her words were slightly drowned out by Annabelle appearing and pulling her to the door. “Oh!” she said. “You’ve met my brother already?” she said. “Darby’s a nice guy, despite being my twin. I’m glad we both got in though. It’s your turn. The head’s nice, you’ll like him.” - wait, confused! was james darby? sorry, i think i mixed someone up... haha. cigarette. i thought of harry potter. how sad of me. i do like the idea. it looks like someone's going to have a very...er... stressful time. all i can say is more deets, about the setting, especially, i didnt get a real soid picture in my mind about the environment. |
| InsaneLaughter 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abusei really like your idea, there are definetly not enough stories about cheerleaders being put into a geeky atmosphere/situation. please dont stop updating your other story, tho. i like that you already have to hot guys around her. can we get more physical description of them? it would make them even more real. cant wait for more |
| Brighde 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseHaha, definitely keep it :P You're right, this story's different from a lot of the one's on here but it's a great idea, and there's so much potential as to where this can go ^_^ Great descriptions, and I really like that you've already got two hot guys around her ;) Hoping for more :) -B. Blum |
| elven-lady22 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it very much. Please keep writing and posting as I'm anxious to see what happens next. |
| CircusCandy 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abusethats funalways nice to read in that fimiliar setting -schoolkeep going with it |