Lol...I think I cut my tongue from saying all the 'th' sounds (I mouth stuff when I read it). Cool poem, though. With a reference to Gundam, nothing can be bad!

Anyway, about the Rapunzel name thing...it's a nickname for me that developed in a volley of e-mails between Felicia and I. AT one point she said that I could 'spin a wicked tale.' and I said 'well, call me Rapunzel.' And now she does. Go figure. It's a fun name, though.

Thanks for the super-huge review on My View Of The World! I'll try to be diligent about writing it!

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The more I read your stuff, the more I enjoy it.

Lol.. great poem. I just did the nervous system in school, so I appreciate the lines about dendrites and stuff. Good content, and amazing alliterations.

This is wonderfully well woven and an interesting read. Quite funny. Well done.

"like a blonde through football teams" lol hilarious. I like this, the ending was quite unexpected.

teeheehee...thinking can be hazardous to your health!

nice rhymes, that was enjoyable to read.

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Haha, I like this. I loved the simile "like a blonde through football teams." Keep up the good work.

HA, that's wonderful. I'm so jealous of people who can actually rhyme in poetry without making it sound cheesy, but you sound very natural. Good job. :-)