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| Frore 2006-05-15 ch 1,  | abuse"all I wished was to be like them…while they all wished they could be like me. (but that’s the cruel cycle darling…no one’s ever happy)" Totally ** awesome. |
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Hel... 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThe last part just makes the poem, I think. It takes it from being okay to being something that is so true. |
| crinkled aster ribbon 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseah, beautiful and so true. gorgeous in a non-synthetic way. |
| myno 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusethe beginning is excellent, but you slip into almsot a prose-ish feeling near the end. |
| broken-butterfly08 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is so true and absolutely wonderful! Beautifully written as well! :) |
| girl with rad i o 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuselove the ending more than any other line in the poem. ;) veryvery true. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseSo honestly true. A wonderful cyclical representation of social interaction. Who's looking at who really. You've captured the feeling so well. Excellent work. |
| Raw Garbage Namagomi 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abusewhoa. trippy. I like. MUAHA! ^.^ luv ya lotsJaye |
| lastchance02 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abusewhat an isolating feeling this poem gives off, but sweet in a way too. Very pretty (thanks for the review, by the way). |
| citrus scented 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseoh god. this is incredible. i can relate to it in some ways...very powerful poem. the images are so shockingly vivid; its amazing. really amazing piece of work. |
| elvenstorm 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written, love the feelings you place into it. Insightful, well done x |
| White is a Sin 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abusethat was awesome thanks for review!! ^.^ |
| none of burt's beeswax 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abusetragic with (flawed) beauty queen glamour. |
| HiddenFlame42 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! The last three lines especially...wow, I love it! |
| cling peach 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuse"you dressed me up allprettylike" Perfect opening line. And I love the red lipstick part. And... wow. "all I wished was to be like them… while they all wished they could be like me. (but that’s the cruel cycle darling…no one’s ever happy)" That just hits the nail on the head so hard to wood broke. Wow. Amazing. I love it. Never stop writing. |