Amazing imagery! I love it.

Christine

Beautiful, fantastic, almost tangible poetry, I love it and you are going straight on my favourites list.

x x x

Yum. The last stanza is extremely beautiful.. "life's adhorent snares" - I really like that..

x Bleached Roses

*jaw drops* beautiful! you have an amazing talent.

this is just beautiful.

wow... beautiful imagery. i love it :)great job.

write on,Em

an archway dripping ivy, fast

jesus. that just leapt off the screen at me. i'm sure it has some deep metaphorical spherical epistemological meaning, but i love it anyway. it's all gorgeous. the last two lines add an... ethereal... fel...

reminds me of some anime game. a lot of breath-taking imagery in here. nice work.

i like it.. very cool

I'm always so jealous of people who write with good rythym.

beautiful work, just lovely imagery, great work!

Wow, beautiful (as usual), good job. I love the rhythym & cleverly flowing rhyme.

love this so much. the rhyme is great - subtle and just well done. the imagery was amazing, i really like your style of writing.

deep imagery stirrs me despite incomplete understanding good work

keep writing!

very thought-provoking. leaves a lot to the readers interpretation, or so i'm thinking.