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Reviews For: Scapegoat for Cupid

i call it laughable
2006-02-11
ch 1,
abuselove the flow. it was so right for this. it's spoken so raw, but poetically so. i just heart the first stanza. you've got talent.
eighteen hundred
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseAwesome. I really like this; the opening worked really well. Good stuff.
FELICIA-SPENCER
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseShort and sweet. Here's to anpther brilliant poem from you. I loved this, and the title was awesome. Great job.
lackluster
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abusethe flow is gorgeous. it adds a sort of tone to the poem that's hard to miss.
Faithless Juliet
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseI love this! The tone of narration is devilish, like you walk out into the middle of the street and you know a car is going to mow you down but you just can’t help yourself. It’s your head battling with the heart kind of issue. Love really is a battlefield. Great work with this, keep it up.

Much love,Juliet.
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