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| i call it laughable 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuselove the flow. it was so right for this. it's spoken so raw, but poetically so. i just heart the first stanza. you've got talent. |
| eighteen hundred 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. I really like this; the opening worked really well. Good stuff. |
| FELICIA-SPENCER 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet. Here's to anpther brilliant poem from you. I loved this, and the title was awesome. Great job. |
| lackluster 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abusethe flow is gorgeous. it adds a sort of tone to the poem that's hard to miss. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI love this! The tone of narration is devilish, like you walk out into the middle of the street and you know a car is going to mow you down but you just can’t help yourself. It’s your head battling with the heart kind of issue. Love really is a battlefield. Great work with this, keep it up. Much love,Juliet. |