I can really feel the emotion, particularly the longing, "...and die when i think about not having you be with me, ever." I also like the way you spaced out the sentences into different lines, it makes sure that the reader actually reads and pays attention to every word, but you used punctuation to seperate thought from thought (which a lot of people fail to do, making their poems confusing and never ending). The summary almost confused me because it makes it seem like that someone has left you and you would be writing a poem about looking back, when the poem itself seems almost entirely in the moment ("I live for this second")Very well written, I like :)

This is nothing short of simply beautiful!