This poem was wonderfully written. I lvoed the end, "Hopefully my feelings will go away altogetherOne day I’ll explode and you’ll wonder why." That really brought every part of the poem together beautifully. I'm surprised to find such a talented writer online, rather than in a book.. everything you've written is truly amazing.

This is amazing.

You have truly struck something deep inside me. I enjoyed this poem, as sad as it was. Yet, it was one of the most powerful poems I have ever seen.

Yours,

~ Cactus

Wow. This is so well written. Excellent work. I can really feel the emotions! Write on!

~Anna~

It's hard when people don't understand you, I like the feelings you've poured in here, it's good to know other people think about exploding, too.

Alan