Fascinating! I feel I can relate to you on this one. Well-executed and I like your choice of words. I especially like the added parenthetical phrases, that really give it that kick. Thank you for rating one of my poems, by the way. I love languages too! Which is probably why I have just uploaded poems with French and German titles!

Love that emotion...just simply amazing the way you write...lovely, just lovely ^^

Good emphasis...great style! Beautiful, just beautiful ^^

Great, great, great! Keep it up! ^^

wow~ a reeling emotional series... tearful ... well expressed

keep writing!

Oh, I didn't realize they weren't related. This one was really emotional, painful even, particularly the last stanza. Very powerful.

wow...this is just...haunting in the things it hints too. really terrorfying, and the underlining almost too hastitly insists it. powerful stuff.

wow this is really powerful and moving. i can just picture it; you tell it all well . so bitter and tragic.

Well written and very true! Impressed.

nice piece. i can really relate to this.

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The first stanza and a half of this I was like, this could be my ** autobiography!! And then.. no. And yeah. Umm. Yeah. Very .. don't have a word.. sad? I don't know. Well written in any case..

Very heartfelt, and once again, descriptive. Another difficult topic to address, but you've given this a valuable voice. Good sad write.

Very honest and descriptive. Difficult thing to go from school to school. I know the feeling well. Good work.

sad. this one really disappointed me, because it has so much reality in it.

well written, sad. . . some parts brought back elementary school memories.