Beautiful...you have done what only few authors have been able to do with such a small amount of words. I, Gaki Toki, am speechless.

Thank you for writing this.

Strange and beautiful.

Fascinating - such a well detailed abstract little short. The whole back story for these characters is intriguing, who are they and why are they? I could really feel the plea of the boy (though I didn‘t understand the reason) but the image of him winged on the hill was so striking. Really great job here, I loved it, definitely made me want to know more. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.