Lovely ♥! fantasy, love, all mixed together. Beautiful.

Beautiful, dreamy scene. Lovely.

what a beautiful love poem, it made my heart melt. there aren't many authors on this website i love reading, but i can't tear my eyes away from these.

Gosh, this is beautiful. Simply gorgeous. Wow.

Oh, how bittersweet this is! The whole poem is so sweet and happy...until you get to the last line, that is. Amazing!

the whole long first stanza-y thing was ORGASMIC. gorgeous, i tell you. so perfect & raw& real &... oh, EMPATHIC. beautiful, beautiful work.

i love all the descriptions you used in this. it was lovely. your words are so breezy thin like faery wings. but maybe that's too romantic, and i should just say that your imagery is imaginative, creative, and paints beautiful pictures in my head.

"we were: so young and it was too beautiful for words" it's classic already. i can just feel it.

beautiful.

"sitting outside in the dusky wind (sugar)b l o w i n gsunkisses into your firefly hair"

I want to kiss that line, and I don't know why. It blew me away. Right out of the earth, I think I landed somewhere near Pluto. This was, god, it was amazing. It was beautiful. It was so so much! Oh my god, this is just... Dazzling!

-screams- do you have any IDEA how much i ** LOVED this poem? i .never.never.never. use capitalization, this is practically a first! -sighs a billion times- it reminds me of... just everything. it's so beautifully written, i want to kidnap you & cage you, keep you in my room and have to talk to me like this, write for me like this, for eternity. god, i love you.god, you wrote it like you're some sort of perfect faerie, i can completely relate to the first stanza, no including the first oneliner thing (which was a perfect way to start it), it was just so beautifully written, the first three lines and. . . (you didn't know i wasn't concentrating on the homework) i could have cried remembering old things. some parts of this makes me want to hate, because it brings back so much, but it's to beautiful to hate. dear god, you're incredible.

this just caught my eye & it's absolutley beautiful. it's shimmery and makes me think of summer, painful+ captivating.

sitting outside in the dusky wind (sugar)b l o w i n gsunkisses into your firefly hair-sahweet. reminds me of sunshine.

all this sweetness is getting to me

have i said "i love you and i want you babies" yet? for the fan-girl that i am i would be shocked if i hadn't, but i have now so the shock is at a minimum. yeah...but your poem really makes me want to say that, your poetry in general (which is fabulous and beyond words). i lovelovelove your unconventional use of words, like "exchanged labyrinthine math equa-tions on the acidwashed bleachers". your vocabulary in general makes me swoon with envy, that sentence alone makes me swoon. love it, just love it.

~* noelle

The ending is poignant. love the words you incorporated into this piece especially 'pixietaleprincess'