 Lullaby Payne 2008-02-13 . chapter 1Oh, yeah, by the way, I don't really hate you. I was just frusterated. Heh heh.
And I'm frusterated again, but I'll refrain from the name calling that's nagging at my tongue. I'm too tried. o.o
SO anywho, I REALLY WANT TO READ IT! Have you been published yet? I want you to be published. Very badly. And I am desperately hoping that your other work has not been taken away, too, because that would break my poor, mentally tortured heart.
Did you know that confusion is a SIN in Taoism?
Okay, sorry, random moment over.. as I said, I'm tired and aggrivated... So if I make no sense, sorry.
So... yep.
KEEP WRITING!
(OMG! AND YOU LIKE SUKISHO! AH THAT'S SO COOL! Aside from Ai no Kusabi, it's my favorite! ^.^) |
 merrymowmow 2007-01-24 . chapter 2I was wondering when you're going to update. |
 SerialXLain 2006-08-29 . chapter 7Whoa O_O I read this forever ago and never reviewed :feels guilty:
And now you're going to get a sucky review anyway. XD
I loved it ^_^ Cute as always.
xo |
 SerialXLain 2006-08-02 . chapter 6Hahaha it was kind of strange seeing Kotaru being a little more...agressive for once. ^_^ I liked it.
The rest was very cute ^_^ Yay!
Love xoox |
 Ayame-Sohma's-Pet-Kitten 2006-07-24 . chapter 6I liked the hot springs idea. Monaru and Kotaru are perfect for each other... So Riri/Lily is American? And so are her parents? Or is it just her parents? Monaru is clever... never give them the whole story if they might not like it. He he heh... I look forward to reading the next chapter!~Ayame |
 Amberhawk 2006-07-22 . chapter 6Once again, awesome chapter, Shizumi-sensei! I loved that part about Kotaru and Monaru discussing adopting children. It just struck me as extremly cute! Up-date soon...? |
 SerialXLain 2006-07-05 . chapter 5Sweet and sexy ^_^
I loved the "can I be lewd" "that's understood" part. It made me smile.
XD And the ending... I would've loved to walk in to see that. Not to sound perverted :shifty eyes: Just because it would've been very cute/sweet/yummy to see XD
Love!!
Oh...And if I remember correctly...I left really suddenly while talking to you yesterday but I'm not sure... My friend wanted the computer. Blah. |
 Amberhawk 2006-07-04 . chapter 5*Glomps*Wai!I love this story SO much!Kotaru-san is one of the cutest things to ever survive!This chapter was so awesome!WHy am I putting all of these exclamation marks?!Oh well!WHo cares?!UP-DATE! |
 Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doom 2006-07-04 . chapter 5Oh my god, I thought I had reviewed before now!
So yeah, in case I didn't review in the first story, either, I want to say that I love this series and I wish you would write more in it. Every time you post a new chappy I have to go back and read the previous one to remember what's going on.
Not that that's like, a punishment or anything. I love the story enough to do that.
So... eagerly awaiting your next update! Please don't keep me waiting too long!
♥'s and X-Rated Thoughts-- Luci-chan |
 faen 2006-07-04 . chapter 5'okami' can also mean 'wolf'. It's the last name of the wolf clan in my friend's fic.
But on the subject of your story, this is amazing. I've been reading since the beginning (sorry I haven't reviewed) and I love it. My only complaint is that you don't update often.
But even so, update soon, please? |
 aaya-chan 2006-06-15 . chapter 2 One of these days, I'm going to have to call the Grammar Police on you. When I call them, they are going to drag you off to the worst place imagineable--The Land Without Yaoi. However, seeing as the hour until I get off my lazy arse and find the Grammar Police is far off, PLEASE LET ME BETA!Daisuki da yo.Venom-sama |
 SerialXLain 2006-06-15 . chapter 4I love how his parents are so accepting of them. ^_^ It makes me really like them...and since they're nice, it makes it obvious why cute little Kotaru's so nice.
Whee! What're they going to do for Xmas?!!? Something delicious I hope.
Love xoox |
 SerialXLain 2006-04-30 . chapter 3Ugh pushy girls putting doubts into cute little Kotaru's head. They must die. I'll go get my flame thrower.
love xox |
 SerialXLain 2006-02-12 . chapter 2Whoot for crossdressing and sex in a car.
I like Kotaru. He seems so shy...and sensitive...hehe... Cutie.
Monaru fan club...I'd be part of that, I'm afraid. T_T; Sigh. Do you watch Fruits Basket? If you do...I'd be like one of the Prince Yuki fangirls...
Love xox Lain |
 aaya-chan 2006-02-12 . chapter 2 omg, u really need to start telling me when u update...poopie head...lemon is fun...yes, i love all sorts of citrus...lalalalala i think im goin crazy...maybe i already am...o b4 i 4get (again)...sensei sed that if u dont wanna go bak 2 judo, then ya'll can sell ur gi...also, when u write the lyrix of a song, dont put that there is an instrumental, it makes u look stupid...u really need a beta...im bored and dont wanna go finish my notecards for my research paper...blah...only 9 more... |