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Reviews For: The Poet's Ballad

Olivine
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abusehey, i like writing haikus!! theyre fun.

lol, but i do like your style of writing. sort of olden timed, i guess you could say. judging by the way you spoke in your profile, though its no suprise.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-
La Gitane
2006-02-12
ch 1,
abuseAnother excellent poem. Your repeated 'clickety clackity cling' just sings of fun mockery. I think you may have just described every would-be poet, ever. But I think, just to be fair, you should include the pseudo-cynics/humourists. Because some of them are just as bad. (And by the by, I feature in more of these stanzas then I care to identify!)

You've acquired a fan, btw. I feel it's only fair to tell you that. :)
mint cookie
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseI liked it. Witty, funny, and cute.

Tehee.

XO
eighteen hundred
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseThis is neat; the "clickety-clackity-cling" sound added a lot to the piece. Good stuff.
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