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| Olivine 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abusehey, i like writing haikus!! theyre fun. lol, but i do like your style of writing. sort of olden timed, i guess you could say. judging by the way you spoke in your profile, though its no suprise. keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:- |
| La Gitane 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseAnother excellent poem. Your repeated 'clickety clackity cling' just sings of fun mockery. I think you may have just described every would-be poet, ever. But I think, just to be fair, you should include the pseudo-cynics/humourists. Because some of them are just as bad. (And by the by, I feature in more of these stanzas then I care to identify!) You've acquired a fan, btw. I feel it's only fair to tell you that. :) |
| mint cookie 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Witty, funny, and cute. Tehee. XO |
| eighteen hundred 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is neat; the "clickety-clackity-cling" sound added a lot to the piece. Good stuff. |