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| Olivine 2006-02-20 ch 1,  | abusehaha. this one was pretty funny, although i dont agree with mocking my favorite form of poetry XP keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:- |
| La Gitane 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseAh ha ha. You are brilliant. It's so damn true! I also love that you're writing a flawless haiku, but using it for such sarcastic measures. |
| The Fool On The Hill 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuselol good point. nice job |
| Crystal Blaize 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseha. I liked it |
| Teufel66 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseHeh, I like this! lol, it's kind of mocking poems...but it's neat. =) |
| Zaphod Beeblebrox 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseROFL! That's all there is too it. My only complaint is that you should have stayed with the style to the end of it. Perhaps something like, "Hits the ground, spattering dust from the earth. And the world wonders, 'why do I care?' It's just a fricken leaf!'" Just my opinion of course, but it might increase the effect. Funny stuff. |