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| SilverApocalypse 2008-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseBloody brilliant. I love the imagery you invoked, especially when endowing nature (the rain, the moon, the wind, etc.) with human characteristics. Perhaps it's the most human of us all, huh? My favorite lines in particular were: "The wind feels pity and caresses his cheek." "The moon hides behind her clouds, not wanting to see what hides in the dark below." They really show that when reality beats harshly upon those living it, that nature can be the only comfort in the hours of dispair. This is definitely one of my favorite pieces from you. Love it. |
| liquid-dreams-139 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abusethis is soo sweet... and touching. oh my gosh i was frowning the whole time its just so sad... and the girl at the end is so sweet, yet now she is the one alone. thats the cruelty of the world. damn, the cruelty of the world. this was powerful yet brief, so you were left thinking and pondering. you're a great writer. keep it up. |
| spiking-cowgirl 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abusewow. what a powerful piece. i love the last sentence. it's beautifully expressive. in your profile you mentioned a piece - "Hell's Angel". are you planning on publishing it anytime soon? it sounds intriguing. |
| YuLian 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseAW! so sad... -YuLian |
| controv3rsyxx 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abusei really liked the imagery in this one. it's almost as if it were fantasy. the way you portrayed the story is good(: i especially liked the last sentence (: |
| Adakua 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very dark story. I'm not sure that this is really fantasy, because there's no unreal event here. But, it's your story not mine. Yet, it's really good! I mostly like dark tales when I have nothing to do. Though, you could at least put in character names or something. Just Please don't get offensive. This is not a flame or stuff like that. I'm just telling you want I think about your story. Isn't that wjat reviews are about anyway. Sorry, for the long review. I don't usually do this a lot. Still, I like the story. ^^ ~~Water*Healer |