I cannot possibly describe how well you have placed emotions into this piece. I am afraid that if I try to say how much I liked this piece, it would prove to be inappropriate.

I loved it. I really, really did. So much that it is leaving me speechless.

oh wow, do you know how much I love this? The pace throughout the poem was brilliant, the whole thing was so beautiful. The imagery and discription... everything was done so well. I love the way this is written. wonderful.

The poem really just sent my mind into a whirl. It's just very powerful and invokes a dozen different emotions within. Great.

Aw, sad. I love the descriptions, so vivid & real... like, darkly real, or something. Great job, I love this.

l o v e it. the beginning is awesome, equating a broken window cliché with his face & then just straight up narration that's SO true, so honest. "just because I'm breathing doesn't mean I'm alive - & i think you switch gears a couple of times you keep changing from metaphorical to more narrative but it fits together like it was made to. it's love-lovely.

~kait

heartbreaking. especially at the ending, some parts reminded me of myself.

The opening was very impressive and strong, it really set the motion for the poem after it. Wonderful, I love it!

i loved the line: (not so) sublte knife. brilliant. (have you read the phillip pullman books. i.e. 'The Subtle Knife'). this poem was beautiful and so sad. the metaphor of the eyes sewed shut was scary and my favourite line was the last - it was sad. this flowed nicely and was well written.

this review didn't make much sense. i was trying to be systematic in my praise. ah well. just remember: i liked this a lot and i love reading your stuff(there that wraps it up:Pnice work.

This is amazing. All the imagery (colours! wonderful uncomfortable colours!) you used really adds so much volume to the poem. Great and disturbing (but in a different-than-usual way)- nice lines, the only one I'm not sure of is the first. Keep it up - I'll be watching...

-The Whispering Calls-