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| bleepbloopbanana 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseSweet poem. Simple yet very expressive. I suck big hairy balls when it comes to poetry, so I won't even try to critique it (I'll just end up embarassing myself -sigh-) but I liked it very much. Good work, keep writing and... here, have some cow juice! Enjoy. -Bleep |
| brokendreams21 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseYay. Reminds me of summer in such a cold time. I really love this poem. It strangely reminds me of V-day (this Tuesday) although your poem is about summer. Poem gave me a warm feeling. The last two lines were a great conclusion. Like the tide, 'boys of summer' come in, and they leave. Awesome job! |