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Reviews For: My Boys of Summer

bleepbloopbanana
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseSweet poem. Simple yet very expressive. I suck big hairy balls when it comes to poetry, so I won't even try to critique it (I'll just end up embarassing myself -sigh-) but I liked it very much.

Good work, keep writing and... here, have some cow juice! Enjoy.

-Bleep
brokendreams21
2006-02-11
ch 1,
abuseYay. Reminds me of summer in such a cold time. I really love this poem. It strangely reminds me of V-day (this Tuesday) although your poem is about summer. Poem gave me a warm feeling. The last two lines were a great conclusion. Like the tide, 'boys of summer' come in, and they leave. Awesome job!
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