i really love your poem... it's beautiful

this is so cute.im not sure i got the full point of it, but i got goosebumps when I read it and im definitely putting it on my favorites. this is amazing.

I like this poem... but unfortunately, my mood is not with it. I can only relate to a shadow of it, if that makes sense. I'll read your story so I can get the context of it, but at a later time.

Presence

great poem! i really love the descriptions and the image it leaves you with is lovely. reading this poem made me smile which is sometihng i don't do often anymore. sorry i havn't reviewed you latetly ive been really busy with college work. your poetry centainly seems to be good and i hope you are to.

This made me stop and think a little. I love the way you can make it rhyme, even though it seems you didn't try. It seems like one long ripple in the water, instead of a wave. I've only just begun to drink, it seems, from this poem... Maybe with further thought I can see some of the meanings that still lay hidden from my searching eyes.

That was a beautiful poem. I love the images it created and the rhyming was wonderful. It was really good... I'm sorry I don't have more to say about this, but I'm not sure what else I can say. You did an amazing job. It's so peaceful and happy. It's like drinking hot chocolate at Christmastime. So, yeah, great job.

WOW.
Astonishing ideas and writing.
...amazing. Kudos to you.

Always write on! :)

Wow...That was just...WowAmazingI could only hope to be that good at some time in my life!

By the way, thank you very much for your review of "I'll Never Be Her". I see your point, and I'll try to fix it! :) Thanks again!

Keep up the AMAZING writing!

I like the imagery and the subject a lot. I like the change in the last couple of stanzas from mellow passion of the rest of the poem to a grounded reality and a distant appreciation in the last two lines. This is pretty much what I said about your other poem, but this poem feels like what I love about the sky.

Love it! It's really good, especially the part about dipping your wings into the buildings, and staining them with the colors of the sunset.

I love the imagery. If I could paint the sky, I would. =]

Thanks for the poem - I loved it.

Wow, really beautiful... I very much enjoyed reading that.

This is very nicely written, I love the imagry. This was used in one of your stories? I'll have to read it. And also thanks for the review.

this is beautiful! this has to be one of my favorite poems!

This is beaitful! Its so...seren.