ya know, i normally don't like haiku poems, but this one is great! congrats! you may have converted me. it's lovely.

i like the concept. love the last line.

I love every word of this.

hehe...sings along..."the best part o' believe is the lie" I always wanted to use that line! I love song inspired works. I love haiku. So I loved this poem. Keep it up!

I like it. Haiku has always seemed a little wacky to me: fitting what I have to say on a certain subject into 17 syllables was never a talent of mine. But you've mamaged to capture something here, and that's to be commended. So good job.

p.s. You are so crazy cool for being inspired by FOB.