|Reviews for The Deep Blue|
| Plinky 2/16/06 . chapter 1
Wow, lovely images. Nicely written - you do rhyming really naturally.
Tragic really is the best word for this. Beautiful poem. Keep writing!
| NIC MIRUSAKI 2/11/06 . chapter 1
ey nice one!
| i call it laughable 2/11/06 . chapter 1
so pretty. i love when people add dancing to their poems, because seriously, dancing is so expressive! hah. some people say it's overused, & i guess it is, but that's 'cause it's powerful.
lovely twist at the end. i love morbidness. hehe.
| Bonfire Of The Sanities 2/11/06 . chapter 1
I love this, tragic and beautiful...VERY nicely done!
| eighteen hundred 2/11/06 . chapter 1
This is pretty good. Made me think of Tori Amos, for whatever reason. You handle rhyme well; good stuff.