Wow, lovely images. Nicely written - you do rhyming really naturally.

Tragic really is the best word for this. Beautiful poem. Keep writing!

ey nice one!

so pretty. i love when people add dancing to their poems, because seriously, dancing is so expressive! hah. some people say it's overused, & i guess it is, but that's 'cause it's powerful.

lovely twist at the end. i love morbidness. hehe.

I love this, tragic and beautiful...VERY nicely done!

This is pretty good. Made me think of Tori Amos, for whatever reason. You handle rhyme well; good stuff.