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| Infection 2006-02-11 ch 1,  | abusethis was really good. |
| gold against the soul 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I think you pretty much captured that, the way that home is like a concept and not just a house. I like the simplicity of the last line. Nice. |