wow so pretty...such a great collection.

loving the line "vacant eyes" nice job!

loving the lines from this poem...it's so lovely. keep on going!

I'm a bit unsure about this...

The last line to this one is oh so chilling. Their all beautiful actually. continue continue! :)

Oh wow. These are all so beautiful. I especially love the 3rd one - you have created such an amazing image here. Even if you say they are incomplete, I think they're intense and perfect just the way they are.

Oh, I love it. It's all so cleverly done, not to mention beautiful.

ah, interesting and harsh.

red takes over until valentines day

an era of uncompleted . tadah.

lovely

a skinny little thing- harsh but not too so.

reminds me of watching kids who know they are cool but only self-proclaimed

aw. emeralds, it makes my day to hear of them. or to see them.

seems tearing

it's supposed to be 'your' i think but other than that. . . wow, i love the last two lines (even tho there's not too much to pick from lol).

this one was a pretty good one, i like the theme to it.

you may say that they are incomplete but they seem to be. adding anything else would ruin the effect.

this may be short but it's one of the saddest and sweetly written things i've ever read.