Reviews for Everybody's Fault But Mine

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Enigmatic Margaret 2007-11-14 ch 1,	abuseHey, I really like this idea and hope you continue it. =] I think I already love Lucy.. haaha. As annoying as she's meant to be. Well.. hope you update it soon.
MeZzeDUpGuRL 2007-05-22 ch 1,	abuseOh man! It was only a chapter? I was excited to read the rest of it! Anyway, good work. PLEASE, some more! -Jessi
Aero Faerie Extraordinaire 2006-05-28 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. To be blacmailed by your stalker. Never a good situation. Cool idea, write more. Much love, Aero
Sam 2006-04-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseThe first chapter of this story is so hilarious and cute. I find Lucy really adorable, haha, maybe because I can relate, haha. Lucy is the annoying character that grows on you. Even when I'm reviewing this I'm still laughing. You should keep the story in Trent's pov because he makes it funny. You have to continue this story, please. Thanks.
reallyinnocent2007 2006-04-24 ch 1,	abusethis is interesting.
FailureByCreation 2006-02-17 ch 1,	abuseI must admit this story is QUITE the cup of tea. I love that Lucy always wears sunglasses. Spiffy, at least I thought. Yup. Also while I was reading the part where Trent started drying the measuring i said to myself, "Self, that sounds like a Home Ec class." Just thought you'd like my insight. Maybe not. Oh well deal with it. Anyhow can't wait for you to update. On the edge of my box. Yes BOX. Hey, what can i say we just moved. >.
Plinky 2006-02-16 ch 1,	abuseWow, this sounds like a great start! Characters sound really interesting, really original details, and sounds like fun! Straight into the story, which is great! Nicely written. Keep writing!
amour propre 2006-02-16 ch 1,	abuseI like the way you portray Rose. Trent is still pretty much clueless about her, but you manage to give us insights into Rose's character by her actions. (How she didn't sound sorry at all, etc) We're only on the first chapter, so of course it's too early to judge, but Trent seems like a nice guy, just bit weak. I have a feeling Lucy is going change him. All in all, this was much better than I thought it would be (from the title... yes I judge books by their covers). I love Lucy. I love the little glimpse into her personality (from Trent's POV) "Lucy had an infuriating habit of making conversation with people from school whenever she saw them in public, no matter how much they might be annoyed by her." By the way, in case you don't remember me, you reviewed my story "To Be Queen." Thanks for your review!
GryphonFledglingOfSilverWin... 2006-02-14 ch 1,	abuseHello, it's Martel/Gryph from YoungWriters, responding to your message for critique... I have to admit that this was very well written... The character of Trent, especially, was great and believable and your story telling and exposition were wonderful. However, I just have to ask why so many stories today have to revolve around teen/pre-maritial flings...? But this was good. Trent seems to be self-denying and merely running at the mercy of his friends. Or of the cliques, I suppose. My applause to you on a masterfully written piece... ~GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
Candy Trojan 2006-02-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like this a lot. It seems like a very fun story and I'm excited to see the way it progresses.
WickedLoveChild 2006-02-12 ch 1,	abuseHey! I really enjoyed reading your story. It was adorable, and I couldn't help but like Lucy and be a little embarrassed for the way she was acting, but it's cool that's she's basically oblivious. Yea, so, great first chapter. Really, I can't wait to read more!MariaPS Trent's dad...what a way to die!
Wicked Witch Krandomity 2006-02-11 ch 1,	abuseThis is great, I'll definitely be back for chapter two. =) You're characters are so addictive and so...characterized, if you know what I mean. Anyways, yeah. Update! Happy Writing! W.W.Krandomity
MB Rumpf 2006-02-11 ch 1,	abusehey i got your e-mail from youngwriters101 asking for constuctive critisizem. Question: whats the plot line. Is he gunna fall in love with that stalker chick, lucy, or what? Oh can you R&R my work too?
Doll in Pink C0nverse 2006-02-11 ch 1,	abuseHahaI love you're summary. I so know what he means I always fall inlove with ny stalkers, their so irresitable. ( Note the sarcasim)Nice story, can't wait for more.-tweetz
hijacked ambulance 2006-02-11 ch 1,	abusehehe, aw, this is so cute. i simply adore lucy- she sounds cute. and i love how she wears sunglasses all the time. lovely character trait. very good start. it's interesting, and it's pretty funny too! woot, good stuff.

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