:) this was written very nicely, i really like the flow, it's beautiful. keep it up! :)

the feeling in this poem is very sweet.

I like it. Very nice. :)-Sarah

I like it ^_^ It's an awsome rhyme scheme, I might have to try one like this ^_^

this would make a lovely song

Wow, this is very beautifully written. It's very cute, and I love the "scream and fly" parts. Keep on writing!